Penta- Gram

Hi Andrew! I'm Cacoethic, the other person in the game jam who made a visual novel! I've been excited to check out your work, so I settled down today with it. I really enjoyed it! Your characters have lots of personality and the designs are really cute and distinct! I like that you had fun with it and just embraced the silliness of the concept, it made it really entertaining and allowed for a lot of surprises.

I really want to commend you on completing a game too; it's a big feat to handle on your own. Visual novels are tasking in their own way, because once the assets are in place it's all pure writing. I think you did a great job making as much progress as you did. Really nice work, I hope you stick with game-making so we can see more from you!

Here is a participant's badge for the jam! 

Nice job on figuring on the visual novel engine and making a game!

I played through the different characters, there's quite a lot of content!

I did run into repeating text sometimes, and I got stuck in a loop with Tamara trying to measure the nutmeg. 

I could see something where you focused on one character and did some branching other than having 4 separate lines, and had more granular interactions? Anyway that's just a thought, nice job!